Zebrasys

The Last Disappearance 
of Atlantis

by Elliot Edwards

THE CHARACTERS

Coconuts -- Prehistoric Girl
John Hasty -- Prehistoric Man
Philly Johns -- Prehistoric Boy
Polar Bear Bill -- Prehistoric Boy
Fieho Rivers -- Prehistoric Man





CHAPTER 1 -- Coconuts and Her Friends Leave Each Other

Once upon a time there was a volcano.  The volcano sat on an island named 
"The Lost World of Atlantis."  And the island was big, even bigger than 
St. Simons island in Georgia.  It was as big as the world!

But Coconuts and her friends, they found the volcano.  There was a secret 
passage under the volcano.  And Coconuts found the secret passage, and she 
opened the secret door.

She went in and found a Time Twister.  It looked like a dome with three 
antennas on it.  There was  a dome-shaped door, big enough for her and her 
friends to fit through.  The whole Time Twister was big enough to hold all of
them.  They all went in and rode to the future.  To the time of the Pilgrims.

They went out of the Time Twister and they found a deep, dark cave where a 
Time Cruiser was.  They went in the Time Cruiser and they went to the past 
when the dinosaurs lived.  These dinosaurs could talk.  
One of them said: "Come here Offeasaurus and dance with me."  

There was a giant record player playing music.

They found another Time Cruiser and they went in the Time Cruiser and they 
found yet another Time Cruiser big enough for only Coconuts to fit in.  There 
were enough Time Cruisers for each of Coconuts' friends as well as Coconuts.  
They used the Time Cruiser's computers to contact where to go.  They used 
voice mail to tell each other where to go.

They went forward in time.  This did not help Coconuts.  She stayed in the 
time of the dinosaurs.  Coconuts' friend found another cave where the 
contacters led them deep into the heart of the volcano.  These friends were 
seeing deep into the heart of the volcano.

The friends did not know, but inside of the volcano were pictures all around 
them.  They were live-on-picture paintings of all colors.

Coconuts was all alone in the time of the dinosaurs.  She found nothing to 
guard her from the dinosaurs, so she went in time to the time of the people,
meaning the time now.  In modern times, Coconuts lived in many caves.  She 
found swords and shields.  She went back in time to the dinosaurs again.  
She thought she cut off the Tyrannosaurus Rex's leg, but actually she had 
scraped a scrape on the wall of the mountain. 

The reason the dinosaurs appeared to talk was that there was another person 
in the cave.  This person knew ventriloquism.  It sounded like the dinosaurs 
were talking,  

Coconuts' friends were talking to each other in the cave.  
They said: "Coconuts is all alone in the time of the dinosaurs."  
One of them said: "She went to the modern times.  I asked her, on the 
contacter, 'where did you go?' and she said she has been to the modern 
times."  Meaning right now.

"She found a sword and a shield" one of them said.  Another one said: "She 
thought she cut off the T-Rex's leg."

CHAPTER 2 -- The Coke Pond

Coconuts was walking around until she found a little river and she swam in it 
until she found black water.  It tasted like Coca-Cola.  Actually, it was 
Coca-Cola!

Coconuts' friends, who were in the time of the cave men, were talking about 
Coconuts.  One of them said: "she's still not here from the time of the 
dinosaurs."  Another one said: "Let's talk to her on the contacters."  "I'll 
talk to her", John Hasty said.

While Coconuts was swimming in the Coke pond, she tried to get to the surface 
but it was too sticky.  Coconuts said: "This is a trap."  

She was swimming until she found a ladder that led to an unknown planet which
was really just a drawing in the heart of the mountain.  

When she got to the planet, she bumped her head because it was a drawing
of a planet.  It was a planet that was unknown like the planet in "Star Kid." 
 She found out that the planet was not a real planet.  So she went down the 
ladder and she swam to the shore.

While Coconuts' friends were talking, John Hasty said: "BOOM, BOOM!"  A voice 
from behind said, "Why did you say that, John?"
And he turned his head around and it was...

...Coconuts!

She found out that there was a Coke pond in the time of the dinosaurs, and 
she told the whole story to her friends.  But there was nobody at the time of 
the dinosaurs.  But she knew that somehow she could get back to Atlantis.
Actually she was still in Atlantis since the volcano was in Atlantis all the 
time.

Chapter 3 --- The Giant Hammerman.

They were walking to the river until they heard a loud cracking noise: 
"BLACKIT! BLACKIT! BLACKIT!" They ran to the place where the cracking noise 
was coming from, and they saw somebody holding a hammer.  He was cracking the 
ground with the hammer.  Coconuts said,
"I've seen him before!  He is the giant hammerman."  

The giant hammerman was looking until he saw them.  "MMMMMMM", said the giant 
hammerman.  He grabbed them.  Actually, they thought he grabbed them, but, in 
fact, it was only an elevator lifting them up.  

They tried to get down, then they realized it was an elevator, so Coconuts 
said, " Jump!"  Coconuts jumped first.  Her friends jumped next. Then 
Coconuts rushed to the control panel that controled the elevator, and the 
elevator went down.  At the same time, the giant hammerman's hand came down 
with the elevator.  

Then Coconuts and her friends followed their own foot tracks and they found 
the time of the dinosours, the same time as the time of the magic carpets.